yeon622e
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I received feedback like... "The atmosphere looks relaxed, but the pose is stiff." "The decoration is just flower branches, making it monotonous." Then, on someone's recommendation, I went to an AI and tried "What would it look like if I changed it like this?" Seeing that, I thought, "Ah, this is the feel if I incorporate that." In the end, I fixed the right arm pose, reduced the face size, and drew a butterfly, resulting in the attached image (right). The one I drew alone without feedback is (left). I know my skills are far from enough to evolve into something that can earn a living. I also know this is a board where we praise each other and grow. To grow further, I'd appreciate praise, but I'd also be grateful if you could hit me with some facts...
2026.09.12 PM 10:18 · View Count 187
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Lv.44
투타임여친
It looks like an illustration!!! So pretty.. I don't know much either, but I'll give you some feedback based on what I know.. Personally, I think the pose in the left picture looks more natural, and the pose in the right picture is also good enough! Here's some feedback (based on the left picture): 1. The eye area feels a bit off. -> I think the forehead area feels a bit awkward, it seems too short. 2. The form of the clothing wrinkles isn't very clear. -> Since the wrinkles are visible but not distinct, it might be good to make the colors a bit darker. 3. The shadows aren't very visible. 4. It would be good to decide on the 'main focus' of the picture. -> For example: Hmm.. maybe adding a blur effect to the cherry blossoms in front, or darkening the character a bit with shadows to make them stand out more? I'm not a professional and I'm not good at drawing, so my opinions might be wrong!
Lv.14
두바이찹쌀떡
The flowers and trees... are amazing. There's so much detail in the hair and accessories, so it must have been hard to draw, but I think you did a really great job!! I'm not exactly a professional, but for the green-haired character, there are wrinkles on the white clothing part, but the skirt or blue clothing part? has no wrinkles, so it looks a bit lacking in detail. If there were appropriate wrinkles, like on the white shirt, it would be great.
Lv.4
따뜻한햇감자
1. The background is too cluttered. 2. The body proportions are awkward. 3. Please fix the face.
Lv.73
fluster00pp
I feel like the character gets lost in the background because it's lineless. It might be good to emphasize the colors or outlines, or separate the character from the background with a white glow behind them! Also, in character illustrations like this, increasing the proportion of the hair (the top part) makes them look prettier. And this might be a matter of taste, but it would also be nice to draw the legs longer. I'm also just drawing as a hobby, so I'm not a professional, but these are some amateur strategies I've gathered while drawing... I hope they're helpful!
Lv.3
트롤모친영정
Hmm.....
Lv.49
낑
It would be great if you could press the belly area a bit! It looks like it's sticking out a little ㅠ By the way, you drew the background really meticulously and well😚💞💞
Lv.30
평범한유리조각