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Brother's Drawing (Chilling Deduction)
He drew a big red circle on Mom's belly. I took my drawing book to the kitchen and asked Dad, "Dad, why did my little brother draw a circle on Mom's belly?" Dad, who was chopping vegetables, flinched when he heard my question. Without turning around, he said in a very deep voice, "...Because your little brother knew Mom was pregnant before the car accident. He was really looking forward to being an older brother." I nodded and turned to leave the kitchen. That's when I suddenly got goosebumps all over and started breaking out in a cold sweat. Because I remembered... my little brother had been dead for a year.
2026.09.17 PM 8:47 (Modified) · View Count 60
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Lv.1
波芙
I really held my breath reading that last sentence. The longing for family presented in this way actually makes it feel even more sorrowful and heartbreaking. Are you okay now? Make sure to rest well and don't let this fear linger in your heart for too long.
Lv.85
sange
At first, I thought it was just a kid messing around, but by the end, I was breaking out in a cold sweat!
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Lv.99
無我
Thanks for your great article.
Lv.32
小燕尾
I don't understand what this means, can someone explain it?
Lv.77
暗夜幽香
I don't understand what this means either...
Lv.80
天然咖啡因
Looking closely, the logic seems a bit off.
Lv.102
伊歐
Thanks for sharing! But is there a part 3? I don't quite understand.
Lv.86
亂我玩
Thanks for sharing the story.
Lv.91
SindaW
Let's assume the 'half a year before' and 'one year after' were typos. Confirmation of pregnancy takes about a month at the earliest. If the protagonist knew about their mother's pregnancy before their younger brother passed away, and calculating it tightly, the belly is now about 7 months pregnant. With such a large belly, it seems the protagonist is unaware of their mother's pregnancy. Drawing the belly raises many questions. Furthermore, what's so terrifying about the deceased brother looking forward to becoming an older brother??? Unless the mother's pregnancy happened after the brother's death, but even then, it's not particularly scary. Anyway, if you're going to have AI write suspense, please proofread carefully, otherwise, it will make you seem not very smart.
Lv.90
夜雪雪
Thanks for sharing.
Lv.78
st0815
I don't really understand, did anyone get it? 🤔
Thanks for sharing.
Lv.99
棒呆了9458
Amitabha, may the little angel rest in peace.
Thanks for sharing.

