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Seeking Advice and Feedback!
This is an illustration I drew for my butler character's birthday. I wanted to make it feel softer and more dynamic, but somehow… I feel like it ended up looking static and unrealistic. I'd love to hear your thoughts and advice on how it looks!! I intended to capture the height difference between the butler and the master with an "looking up" angle, but does it come across that way?
2026.09.20 AM 1:17 · View Count 22
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Lv.45
rei1115Y
Beren blushing while being fed cake is so wonderful ☺ I also felt the height difference between the master and Beren, and I thought it was drawn really well! I really admire your skill to be able to draw like this (*'▽'*)
Lv.21
シュレディンガーる
Beren… you're amazing! I'm not good at drawing so I can't give much advice, but I really love the composition!
Lv.28
ねこみんと
It's Beren! What a wonderful illustration! 🫶 It's cute, and I think the way you depicted the height difference with the owner is genius! 💕 Since you mentioned drawing it with an upward-angle perspective, I'd like to offer a small piece of advice 🙏 (just for your reference!) Basically, in an upward-angle shot, the ears are positioned below the eyes! In this illustration, Beren's face and such look more like a straight-on view with just the chin extended, rather than an upward-angle perspective. So, lowering the ear position, slightly directing the pupils downward, or angling the shoulders downward would make it a more natural upward-angle composition 🙆♂️